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One of many modern day evils, is leukemia. Leukemia in an evil that escaped from pandora's box. 22,790 people are suffering from leukemia right now including children. Leukemia is not only evil though. First, people become weak and dependent on others, just for daily actions, such as taking a shower. Secondly, It is very painful to watch someone you love in pain, knowing there's nothing you can do. On the other hand, because of leukemia, many jobs as doctors, nurses, researchers, oncologists, and radiologists have been created. Also, with each diagnoses, they learn more about why people are getting it,more ways to prevent it, and growing closer to finding a cure. Another reason its not entirely bad, is great programs and ways to help other people with leukemia like lucys love bus, which provides comfort to children with cancer, Sy's fund, which brings comfort to adults with cancer, Why me (Worcester Help for Youth, Memories Everlasting) providing housing close to the hospital for children suffering from cancer and their families, And many more. Last, Leukemia is sad because sometimes, people die. Losing someone you love, for example Lucy Grogan, who left behind two younger siblings, is very hard and extremly sad. Though the patient may no longer have to suffer, they will always be loved and missed. Leukemia, changing the world as we know it…